Email from Dan/Beginning scene of the old opening:

This is an email from our teacher Dan giving us feedback after watching our teen opening.

Dan has suggested us to do something similar to this for the opening prayer scene as it uses a variety of shots and lots of close ups.

This is the beginning scene of our opening, we have re-done it due to the feedback from Dan, this lacks close up's and we have used similar camera angles throughout.

 

This will be added on Monday 17th March when we get back to school as currently we do not have access to the footage.

For the new improved opening we hope to use more close ups and also make more aware to the audience what we are doing as Dan said he did not quite understand the prayer scene or the fact it was two different characters at the same time.