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Wednesday, 5 March 2014

Rough Cut Feedback from peers:

After showing a couple of friends the rough-cut they message me their thoughts. Here are the screenshots and their opinions.

















It seems as very body likes the split screen idea but feels each character is lacking focus. In order to change this we will make the praying scene a little longer as well as adding an extra scene which will show the characters getting ready for school/college.

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